Stuck because of a tree

For the last few days we have been making a video that was inspired by being stuck on an escalator basically the video shows how you get stuck and something is so simple to do it stupid. So we all had to make our own version so bella and I decided to do a video together so here it is.

Criteria: (Content)

• Video - 30 seconds long, time is limited. 
• Scenario - Show someone being stuck and not using the ability to act. 
• Clear Message - Short sharp clip. Can the watcher get the point of your video?
• Unique - Coming up with something funny that gets a laugh from others. 
• Time Passing - Do you need to show time passing in your clip to emphasise your message. 

Criteria: (Movie)

• Light - Make sure the sun isn’t creating a hard to see clip. 
• Voice Volume - Needs to be louder than other background volume eg Noise, Kids.
• Frame - What’s in the frame to make your message obvious. 
• Steady Hands - Make sure the camera is still. 
• Individual Clips - Don’t do one continuous shot of 30 seconds. Make a range of short clips and join together. 

Feedback/Feedfoward 

My feedback is it was good you did a voice over and my Feedfoward you should have done the recoding at lunch.

Olivia