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Friday, 8 August 2014

Writing sample

WALT: persuade

Hiwi the kiwi. 

Hey you if you are ever fishing or any kind of boat ALWAYS!! Were  a life jacket. As soon as you get on to a boat put one on.

Ok so now you know about life jackets let's move on. I learnt that also that if you pick up any kind of fish pick it up with a wet towel, the reason is because you know how you have sun block for a protective coat well if you rub a bit off then you would get sun burnt well there protective coat is there scales so pick them up with a wet towel.

now do you know about fishing if you want more information here is some more. Do you catch little fish and eat them? Well DONT!! Because if you do there will be no more fish to eat yet that doesn't just go for small fish it goes for big fish to too now the reason why have to put the big fish back is because they might have babies just from not eating one you can create ten more.

By Serena 

Task: write a persuasive piece of writing about " fishing for the future" 



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